in term 1, we made a Haiku for summer. We had to choose something that we do in summer, and make a Haiku for it. We did it to practice our descriptive writing. Here is mine! 👇 👇 👇
I think you did a good job with the descriptive writing. Waves can be really harsh as the crash against us when we are swimming and beaches are definately hot in the summer! Would you be able to tell me what a haiku poem is tho? That might be something useful to put in your summary. A few month to go til summer is back. Yay!
hello Ibraham I really love your wording it reminds me how I feel at the beach maybe you could improve on your text placement
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ReplyDeleteI think you did a good job with the descriptive writing. Waves can be really harsh as the crash against us when we are swimming and beaches are definately hot in the summer! Would you be able to tell me what a haiku poem is tho? That might be something useful to put in your summary. A few month to go til summer is back. Yay!